Revisions

This revisions did not help me as much as the other ones. I think our papers have gotten to the point that it is hard for students to pick out problems with them and we need help from people who know a little more about English. That's why I am planning on taking all my papers to the writing center before handing in my final portfolio. I have taken papers there before for other classes and they always do a good job of helping me find and fix my errors.